by Frank_Lee
Too rushed, too fast. You made a stand alone that easily could have been a series
I agree that you could have stretched it into a series... but not everything has to be a series. A nice, short, well written story is well appreciated. This was perfect.
While I somewhat agree that not every good story needs to be a series, I do disagree with regard to this one.
Still either way; what better compliment to a writers work than to say it should have been longer because I didn't want to stop reading it?
Often works out that guys got for the bitchy Tina types when someone much better is right in front of their face.
I gave it 5*. This shoulda been put in Romance ategory, where i think it would have earned higher numbers. I also agree you could have a sequel which does get put in the Romance category. It was great to see a successful man realize that love is so much more than skin deep.
Greatest story I read so far.. plus I love thick woman that made it even better