All Comments on 'Economy'

by Frank_Lee

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sheanna23sheanna23almost 8 years ago
too fast

Too rushed, too fast. You made a stand alone that easily could have been a series

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Wonderful!

I agree that you could have stretched it into a series... but not everything has to be a series. A nice, short, well written story is well appreciated. This was perfect.

Tw0Cr0wsTw0Cr0wsalmost 8 years ago
re: not long enough

While I somewhat agree that not every good story needs to be a series, I do disagree with regard to this one.

Still either way; what better compliment to a writers work than to say it should have been longer because I didn't want to stop reading it?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Good short story

Often works out that guys got for the bitchy Tina types when someone much better is right in front of their face.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Shoulda been..

I gave it 5*. This shoulda been put in Romance ategory, where i think it would have earned higher numbers. I also agree you could have a sequel which does get put in the Romance category. It was great to see a successful man realize that love is so much more than skin deep.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great

Greatest story I read so far.. plus I love thick woman that made it even better

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