All Comments on 'Eddie Ch. 02'

Nice Story ...

Liked the story. Just cried when Eddie had to leave. But then I cried anyway.

Write another chapter! Let Sara visit Eddie on assignment, or give him another leave at her house. More description for Eddie, please! He's older than Sara, so he must have some hair on that muscular chest!

Need another chapter with Sara going to Eddie where ever he maybe.

It's a nice story and I enjoyed it. I hope there will be another chapter and maybe Sara & Eddie can get together again? I also hope you are not going the path with the 3 cousins that I think you are. Because if it is it will ruin the story. So I hope you'll stay focus on just Sara & Eddie.

yeah it would really suck on eddies part if she got with the 3 cousins right after eddie! definetely would like more to this story and more about eddie! lovin it

You say that you are not afraid of criticism.....good or bad.....yet you scold those that leave you a comment. I am a professional profiler and the story is written by a guy no question about it. He is probably a guy that has a lot of time on his hands. He is an older guy and most likely retired. I'm not saying that it is a bad story. He is just writing about his younger years. all the things he wishes he would have done and some he had experienced. As you say in you biography you are just writing stories and so I'm just leaving a comment.

I was a bit confused by this chapter. Things didn't flow well for me. It was well written, but I just didn't find anything interesting about it. Still decent though.