All Comments on 'Eddie Ch. 04'

this as turned into nothing but a slut story i am sorry i even started this shit.for someone that waited for her brother to get home she is fucking everybody that says hi to her.she starts out resisting then cant get them to fuck her enough.after eddie telling her about his wife cheating then she does the same thing she is worse.

after that last chapter , I was hoping this would be different . I was as turned off as reb.../ Feeling sorry for Eddy too. Sorry you felt you had to go there. I'll give the next chapter one paragraph and if it doesn't do a turn around, I will; just give it a 1 and I have only done that twice. The story score of the last chpt. should have been enough of a clue that you went in wrong direction on this brother sister story. Good luck

pretty well paced, I pretty much wanna see what happens when Eddie finds out, incest, is 1 thing though bribed into sex is not cool, though I can understand it, when you have large families this can and does happen, especially if it was happening n prior family get togethers..

and reading where this story is sounds like cousins talk and find out who the open bike is....

can't wait to the next chapter god story so far.

This is a slut story. A dumb slut story. The slut submits to everyone that approaches her for sex. She went off the pill for someone that she was waiting for and hoping for without talking to him. Now she is possibly pregnant by someone else. Take the shotgun let her kill herself. Try another story.

Sara, you shouldn't think that the term slut is anything bad. You should read the book The Ethical Slut.

I really enjoyed the story Eddie Ch. 02, 03, 04

I was hoping there was a part 5 an more

Me and My twin sister both feel sexually attracted to each other

An reading your story together has brought us closer together

She an I have been living together for 4 years now an we both love each other very much

We just haven't taken the last step yet

I believe when we see Eddy Ch.05

She an I will be ready for one another

Thanks

Joe an Lisa

E-Mail joseph 2161@aol.com

Chapter 5 has been over 2 years coming, so I guess like so many other stories on here, it is never going to be finished, is it ?

It just so damn frustrating when this keeps happening !