All Comments on 'Eddie Takes Charge'

so fucking awesome lol, i came to this...keep writing!!!

More please! Quick!

Gives a completely different image when I think of that old cola jingle "smile and a coke" now. Had Jackson Browne's lyrics of "cocaine, it's running round my brain" playing in my mind as I read your erotic story. Will Ed loan her out after literally taking her ass? I sure hope so and even more that the nosy old neighbor next door figures it out and comes calling for a taste. Maybe Pam can't keep her mouth shut and confides in a male friend or counselor who also takes advantage of a good thing. You write it and I'll read it. Thanks.

keep em coming! Hopefully she gets ravished more by him and some of his disgusting pals!!

good story. but, she is not gonna fall asleep that fast after doing her first line of coke.

Shouldn't this be in Romance? He slaps her, picks her up by her hair, punches her in the stomach and fucks her. So romantic!

It was a story that i read all the way through and enjoyed it, but not believable at the end. She wouldn't have gone to sleep after all that had happened for sure. Interesting story though.

Marco208, That was one of the best stories - parts 1 and 2 - that I've ever read. Keep up the great work! Hope you continue the series again and again, especially when Eddie comes with her, or when Eddie takes her while his son is nearby. Great job!

I too have been fucking my father in law for years. Enjoyed every minute of it

Only the sick fantasy of an useless author!!!

This is a very touching story... reminds me of my father. It’s good to see a tale of family values... sorely lacking on this site.

Needs to go in a different category.

Bad story @merrySM said it needs to go in a different category and I agree "BAD". The story is not setup to the whys only a drunk rapes his son's wife. Just because a person have an unwanted orgasm while being rape does not me the like it. It just how the body responds whether you are male or female. I remember a minister who forced himself on a woman in church, and he wasn't drunk but it forced her and he husband to leave because the minister made like it was a mistake but according to her he always rubbed up against her ass and she said nothing until she said something out-loud and everyone took notice. This was sexual harassment that caused the church to lose a faithful family.