All Comments on 'Edie's Adventures: First Class Beginnings'

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JoyJoy4MeJoyJoy4Mealmost 6 years ago

Mmm very nice indeed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Sweet and Sexy

I really enjoyed your story. Please continue maybe with Madeline for awhile and then possibly incorporate Layla she seems to be worldly. Open to new experiences.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
First Class

Yeah, a first class little story, or the beginning of a first class story!

Ramot1

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenalmost 6 years ago
Very enjoyable short story!

That I thoroughly enjoyed reading! :-) Thank you for sharing it with us!

Ravey19Ravey194 months ago

Excellent short story. 5

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