All Comments on 'Edie's Journey Ch. 05'
by penny_coyne
- 13 Comments
jpb531over 11 years agoThat's really disturbing and wrong on so many levels. This story started out quite nice and went south very quickly.
Anonymousover 11 years agoIt is so wrong to change a person with hormones and castration against their will. Edie was not given a choice in what had been happening to him. Grandma knew what she was planning on doing and did it against Edie's mom and father wishes. The mom should have removed Edie from the farm before it got to the stage of drugs and surgery. And grandma was no qualified surgeon and could have killed Edie. To do this to your own flesh and blood and the bond of a child to their mother is so wrong. It would have been better to drug grandpa so that his sex drive would be reduced to almost zero. He would have not died from having sex then.
Anonymousover 11 years agoSorry but this is the last of your stories that I will read! I can't believe you would put castration against his will into this! I guess this makes you a pretty sick fucker and I won't read another word of it! This sucks!!!
lindsey4cumover 11 years agoAgainst their will is bad. But as old fashion would be I could see how and why that would be done. Lol funny and sick, like clerks she fucked him to death! If I were to go out it would be that or trying to save the world! Lol
Anonymousabout 11 years agoThat was some crazy hot, taboo stuff. Sex with the grandpa... so naughty!
For the haters: guys, this is a *fictional story*.
Newsflash: Dominance/submission is an erotic concept for many people.
"It is so wrong to change a person with hormones and castration against their will." DUDE. You're making moral arguments about an erotic story in which the lead character is having sex with his GRANDFATHER.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoMade perfect sence to me, castration and grannys solution to pull her penis through back to her pussy. Too bad about grand pa, would have loved to revisit Eddie later on.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoI wish my family was so excepting that is what makes this such a good read.
Anonymousover 10 years agoWhat a wonderful story. I wanted to be held and kissed by such a powerful older man. Taking the role of the young bride to his own grandfather was such a turn on! More please. Does Edie have another grandfather to care for????
