by NeedfulThings
No obvious grammatical or syntactical errors, good plotting, believable characters (Caesar is especially well portrayed). Good stuff, keep on writing.
Well done- historical erotica is my absolute favorite- and you are extremely talented. I do hope there is more from you when I click on your profile!!!!
I love getting feedback, so please do comment. It is a great help, knowing my strong points and those areas that need more work. I do love glowing reviews (who doesn't?) but, if you didn't like the story, I would like to know why, as well. Thank you all for your comments!