by CaliforniaDreamer
Keep going, this scenario has potential as long as you don't rush the story line. Don't worry about naysayers and critics.
Really has potential for a lot more. It's nice and simple, and very spontaneous. Keep going like this without rushing and you'll for sure get a few more chapters.
this is part one of a continuing story! If so, it was a great beginning. I encourage you to take this further!
Once again I am tortured and teased in a story that quits too soon. Had a lot of potential.