by Ian_Ironwood
... but, I'm not going to lie, I was getting worried. A good follow up to a brief hiatus, although I was bit disappointed this chapter wasn't "hotter." I look forward to the future additions.
I was dying to see if the old Apache would yell this: as both a fellow western history buff and someone who has shuffled down a static line a time or two myself, I appreciate your wit!
And Billy the kid, too! Nicely played- you have quite the well-developed backfround for your storyline, and the prophecy ties this in with the earlier chapters well.
Very, very pleasing to read, Mr. Lane!