by dayne
I didn't think it was possible for me to love your story even more until I read this chapter. Please don't ever stop writing.
Loved the dialogue and of course, love that they're out as a couple to some more of their friends and teammates.
Holy cow; you continue to dazzle me! I shouldn't have read this on the commute home from work. I snort laughed over Baker and caused even the most jaded of travelers to glance at me! One of your best chapters. And that is really saying something cuz they are all exceptional.
I was so excited to see a new chapter so quickly after the last one. Then I was delighted to laugh out loud through this entire chapter (mostly at poor Baker but also at the fond memories of Bluebell). I love this story so much that I've gone back several times to re-read chapters and I always end up reading the entire damn thing again! Thanks.
It takes serious skills to manage the overlapping interactions way you have. It's so much fun to read every time!
And this gentle rebuke: "By this point, you're just being insensitive to the gay community," makes me almost cry laughing every time I read it. Rice is so confused, but by God he'll stand up for what's right. OMG I love him.
The most romantic thing ever. Best coming out story on lit. And I want to see the movie. Your writing is so cinematic. Love these love birds. The poster below got it right: brilliant.
OVO hoodie, pumpkin pancakes-oops! waffles, Baker's jealous(?) - oh my! Now that was some CS! Funny but Baker definitely an odd duck.
That's was fantastic, and the interaction between all the players too, awsome.
Re reading the series again because I love the character interactions so much. I hope you’re still writing, you have a gift.