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Click hereHow had she misjudged him? Melissa started pacing, trying to figure out what to do next. Before long there would be no way she could hide her condition, then it would be too late for her to find a husband. She looked around at the mess she had made wishing she could find more things to throw and break. Then she was sorry she had broken all of the beautiful things. She needed money and she could have easily sold quite a few of these pieces for enough money to get her through the near future.
That's what she really needed was money. If she could get to France or Italy, she could claim to be a widow then no one would question the lack of her virginity. She wouldn't keep the baby of course. A baby was only a nuisance and she had never had any interest in being a mother. Of course she knew she would have to one day, because her husband would want an heir. After she gave him one, however, she never intended to have another.
Money was of course the real issue. That brought her thinking to Eirin. Damn her. Her solicitor had started refusing to give Phillip her allowance until he could see her. Phillip had put him off for the last two months but the man said he would not be put off again. Either they would bring Eirin to him so he could check on her well-being himself, or they would never get anymore money.
This was all Eirin's fault. She had never once tried to help them. They had come and taken care of her after her father had died and given her guardianship, and how did she repay them? She had a solicitor who refused to pay her allowance. Well, there was only one answer to that. Eirin would need to replace the money she had taken from them by the fact that they couldn't get her allowance.
Melissa was starting to feel calmer. She knew where Eirin had gone; if she would not agree to meet her solicitor personally, then she could raise the money for Melissa herself. Catastrophe averted. She was relieved she wouldn't have to tell Phillip. He had become increasingly upset in the last week. Their allowance had run out in the middle of the last month; he had gambled in several games on credit assuming that he could pay it off at the first of the month. When they hadn't received anymore money, Phillip had had to ask for extensions from people that didn't normally give them.
Melissa smoothed down her skirt and started making her way to the door. She felt so much better now that she had a plan. She knew it would take some time to get everything planned so she could go, but she hoped she could be at Lord Hawthorn's house within a couple of weeks.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 4 years agoFiction is somewhere inspired from historical facts and Eirin's life made me realize what slaves and sex slaves went through across the globe in history and worse, some may be living her life even today. History lessons didnt delve into the life of slaves bought and sold, but this one story written so beautifully, maturely, realistically and with so much depth into the prisoned agony of Eirin, her helplessness, her failing health, her trapped mind and lack of freedom v/s dont care Lord who bought her to inflict injuries and humiliation through sex - receive pleasure from one of slaves that he took to his liking - feeling less pleasurable when slave is not squirming/gasping/begging for him and thus make her beg/humiliate more/break the momentum just for his own pleasure.
Eirin's display of naked body to Lord's guards, his maids, the entire house - she being looked upon just as a body for the Lord to masturbate with - her having no say to her body/clothes/nudity - fear of pregnancy and how to raise child when the mother is a sex slave - Brought tears to my eyes thinking what all women have been and might have been going through. Worse, Eirin's scenario seems on the better side.
The records of Britishers, rape of Australian aboriginals, Irish, Polish, African sex slave trade, the invaders of Middle East, rapes by Ghengiz Khan, the list is endless...never understood the depth of sex slaves and human trade or trafficking in modern lingo, this little piece of fiction makes it so clear.
Beautifully written story. The author has conveyed the depth of his understanding into minds of both leads so lucidly that it straight away touches the heart. Bravo writing!
Found the below few quotes so relevant to the plight of most women today -
"Instead of immediately coming over her, as Eirin expected, he lay next to her and ran his hands over her skin."
"She was so used to how forceful he was, bringing her to the brink of release and then pulling her back until she was sobbing and begging for him to let her come."
"In the past, even when he forced pleasure on her, it was like he was taking the pleasure from her. However, tonight, he'd given up control and in doing so, had seemed to give more of himself.'"
Anonymousover 14 years agoGreat writing. There are a few typos and a few mistakes in spelling and grammar, but with a good editor you could go far. Really, a great story; good plot; not too wordy, but gives the needed information; you even have provided a couple of villains. Good work! Keep it up!
marexotic18almost 16 years agoLord Hawthorne is an ass, and I am not inclined to like him because of what he did, but I hope that he continues to become a better person when it comes to Eirin. I really hope that she gets a break soon! It is frustrating knowing that she doesn't deserve to be there so miserable and alone. I hope that Lord Hawthorne suffers a bit after he finds out who Eirin is! I really love what you've done with Eirin's character. She is so strong, and I love that she is given a voice.
Please post again soon, this story is soo fun to read!!
Anonymousabout 16 years agoThis is a flippin awesome story! I am a HUGE fan of the angst & hope you can keep it up for a bit. Yeah, Lord Hawthorne is being somewhat less of an ass but I really hope that when Eirin comes into her own she rakes him over the coals massively. That being said, I love the way you write his confusion over his growing feelings for Eirin.
This is the kind of story that keeps me coming back for more. I will be checking back constantly to see what happens next. Especially with that bitch Melissa back in the picture. Having Hawthorne kill her, or at least get her indentured, etc., would be a nice way to make up for the way he's treated Eirin, IMHO. :)
Keep up the good work!!!
Tricialenabout 16 years agoFinally you have given Eirin a voice. She is right to keep as much of herself as she can from Lord Hawthorn. I am really happy that you are showing that she has a backbone and that she has a strength of will to protect herself, not physically but mentally. While he has finally seen what his actions have done to Erin, how his servants treat her, he is still clueless about his own guilt. He raped her! He hurt her! And until he can admit that and ask her forgiveness, he's just a disgusting rapist out to satisfy his own needs. And why would he ever think she would forgive him? He raped away something precious from her that can never be given back. I don’t mean her maidenhead…I mean her feelings of control and her feelings of worth. That said...the story is very well written and flows very naturally. I did notice that Erin couldn't put in her sponge so no doubt she'll end up pregnant....and pay no attention to the person who wants this story to end in the next chapter...there is still much to tell... I am wondering if you can make me like him, Lord Hawthorn, maybe even love him...
Plainly_Janeabout 16 years agoVery nice pacing and flow. I like to read stories that have a natural rhythm to them, and this does. Lord Hawthorn is a bit clueless; sometimes it's amusing and other times exasperating - lol. But the slow build up between the two main characters is nice to see.
<br><br>I liked the ending - a sort of cliffhanger, leaving us wondering exactly what mischief Melissa will bring!
Anonymousabout 16 years agoI am addicted to this story...I can't wait to read what happens next! Please continue...this is the best story I've read on here in a very long time!
bdsmbillabout 16 years agoThe story is very well done, but it has reached the stage where you need to start finding closure. Too many authors on Literotica seem to want to keep milking the same tale until is is so tired and stale that nobody cares anymore. When the real daughter shows up, that would be the time to have Lord Hawthorne find out the truth. This is a great story. Just don't drag it out too long.
