All Comments on 'Elaine Wants It All'

Nice build up, nice pace, and nice culmination. But it was a little brief, and has a ton of potential. Let's see what happens now that the ice has been broken.

Overall, I liked the story, but would have liked it better if you had taken the time to write out at least the first sexual encounters between Elaine and Abby, and Elaine and Ken. You sort of glossed over them in a rush to get to the end. You gave us brief synopses, telling us the sex was great, instead of giving us the details as to why it was so phenomenal.

I would like to see at least another chapter, if not more, in follow-up to this one, and please take the same time you did in describing the last encounter in this chapter to describe what (or who? LOL) comes (cums?) next. ;-)

Agree with the prior comment about the dearth of details of the first lesbian encounters and the first sex with Ken. And also agree the two women making Ken cum made up for it. Please give us the details of what happened when the three of them moved it to the bedroom. A 5-star effort. Thanks.

Also Kara, I loved your photo and your sexy legs and feet.

Thanks for sharing.

we hope you have more of these! .... real rock cock stuff

It's so nice to read a story that is both super sexy and free from idiotic grammar and spelling mistakes. I'd love a closer look into their sex, like at the very end. Can't wait for the next chapter!

This is excellent writing. Perfectly punctuated, wonderful tension, and I love the entry into the story of Ken. Wonderful.

Sequel (that is longer) please!

There's not much better than the soft, plump, wet lips of another woman.

Except, of course, fucking her and her hot dad too!

Write more soon.

5*s

Highly Recommended!

Thank you BadAllison for suggesting this delicious treat.

I was really enjoying this right up till the end. I won't give anything away about the story. Just not for me.

Fantastic story! Love the twist at the end :)

Very. Good. Stories. X. Peter. Of. Skype. 561. Peter.Lowe

Very hot and sexy story. I

This is the first story of yours that I have read. I have just added you to my "favorite authors" list. As full disclosure is required, you can expect an occasional reminder that it is time for another tale from deep within your erotic mind! Thank you for sharing and PLEASE continue.

Short and sweet - delicious, in fact!