All Comments on 'Ela's First Time'

by nikkitime

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corriefeecorriefeeover 15 years ago
Slow burn

A relaxed story told on one page with sensitivity, no slam bam thank you mam stuff here, I will look for other writing from this author.

KingCuddleKingCuddlealmost 12 years ago
Solid work...

Nice progressive disclosure...good suspense device.

What happens next? :+))))

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