All Comments on 'Eleanor's Valentine's Day Wish'

Your a dream Mistress! I’m always so impressed with your writing! Very nicely done!!!!!!!!

A love story in its purest form. Heart breaking and tender. Eleanors unselfish act brought a lump to my throat and tear to my eye.

Amazing story from a amazing writer!

it is always a sad time when your life partner passes on from something so bad such as cancer, other than that it was a good story

Nice continuing development of these characters, I enjoyed it quite a bit.

I cried. I laughed. I cried somemore. And most of all i loved...LOVED IT.

Would make a brilliant film

I read all of grounded and then all of this and damn you (in a good way)! Gotta go and make me cry... more than once, too! But that's the mark of an amazing writer, you carried me through all of these extreme emotions in such a gentle and considerate way. Every character held nuance and flaws, conflicts and resolutions were realistic, there was just so much in this. Thank you so much. Please keep writing!

Well now I'm crying... What a lovely story, thank you.

This was an erotic story but also more than that: it left me in tears, and feeling emotionally enriched. I’m impressed. You should write novels along the vein of an erotic Nicholas Sparks.

Never thought I would this much emotion from a story in Literotica ... Amazing isn't big enough ... I lusted, fell in love and grieved with these characters ~ your talent is over the top ... Thank You

I don't think I can truly capture the beauty and heartache of this tale. Thank you, from Grounded In Toronto onward this captured the tragic beauty of humanity.

Hate might be a little strong. A beautiful story. I loved every word, but you made me cry like a little girl. Made me face my own mortality. Normally I come to this site to escape reality. It’s this fantasy world that keeps me sane.

Thank you for writing this.

You are truly a master of your craft.

Keep writing.

Joey.

No love lasts forever. Follow the timeline far enough and you'll always find love's end.

This was a fantastic story, presenting a laudable attempt at making it reach beyond the grave. It doesn't, of course—not really. But we can suspend our disbelief with you and wish that it could.

Oh that hurts so bad ...... Tears running down my cheeks and loosing a soulmate is the most horrible worst case scenario ever happen ...... So definitely a part , may a big part of the own soul, will be gone forever as well ...... Helplessness ....... This is hurting soooooo in body mind soul , pain ....... This is a dramatic tale and so hard to pack into words, you made it even with the short of three pages

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If you're going to tell your loved ones you are dying, do it Eleanor's way: swift and brutal. You can do and say all that needs to be done and said later. A powerful and throat-gripping story. I found it by accident and pleased I did so.

Can't stop crying....

That love was so deep....

Belinda

I read this story with evil intent, going in wanted to continue to dislike Eleanor.

And was undone by it.

Crying too why why…noooo not Eleanor. Any cancer chokes me up as I see my mom each time I read one down to the death. Good job

Yeah, I cried too. Well done