All Comments on 'Electives Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
fine story

great series. I can't believe Brian, he's now been gone for 4 months, who just picks up and leaves his kids and business for this length of time. What an asshole. This whole distribution thing is like a hobby for him, he needs to grow up and take care of his responsibilities.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
thank you

thank you

bruce22bruce22over 14 years ago
Beautiful detailing of relationships

Brian is in a really tough spot. Whatever he does is wrong. He can not leave his responsibilities at the Distribution because it would violently reduce the money his parents would receive as he is the only one with the experience to solve the problems there, on the other hand his businesses could go broke if John Larkin failed in his stewardship. Besides this there is the problem of cheating ex-girlfriend against his passion for Paige. And Paige has her responsibilities at home too.

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