All Comments on 'Elevator'

by Garydesert

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James7594James7594over 6 years ago
With a proper editor, it could be so much better...

"thru" was one of the many glaring errors...

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
You could do better.

You need to add more depth and detail.

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