All Comments on 'Elevator Arousal'

by Clairescent

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daddy1950daddy1950over 9 years ago
First story?

Good start Claire.

Like your writing style, however one small error: 'and begins fingering myself' Substitute 'me' for 'myself.'

tabbymidnitetabbymidniteover 9 years ago
Nice dream

Keep writing that was a fun read and also very arousing.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 9 years ago
Oh Yeah

That was great. I laughed my ass off.

Five Stars

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