All Comments on 'Elevator Meeting'

Not bad, keep writing.

While you're working on the next story please give me a lady's opinion on my latest post:

A Maiden's Dream on the Eve of St. Agnes' Day - She will surely see her future husband.

      Submitted by Abdulbenthere  (Romance) 12/18/10

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=508760

much improved over first submission... but I have to ask, by opening with 'It was a dark and stormy night...' aren't you baiting people to write more negative things given the clichéd beginning?

Still, this fic shows effort. Keeping working on it!

Yea, I know that starting with "it was a dark and stormy night," is a real cliche but, I felt it wouldn't't be that bad. now I know. Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it.