All Comments on 'Elevator Shafting'

Great! Great story. It reminded me of some adventures that I have had.

Keep writing more, I'll be looking forward to reading them.

I loved your story - keep up the great work! I always wanted to have sex in an elevator, too. I read your profile - it's hard to believe you're a erotic story virgin!

...being handled roughly AND you're single?!.

Um, look...uh, I...uh, I NEVER do this, but...um...

Marry me?!

At the very least - keep writing!

A good start to your writing career so far, although to add just a bit of reality to your story it might be difficult to have an elevator stopped for 2 hrs in a busy building. Aside from this nit-picking an overall fine effort. Keep writing.

omgosh! that was fucking cool... i wish i was her..

I've got to take the elevator more often!

Hot story - loved the tongue kiss with his cum on her face. All this story needed was a third guy - I thought the guy on the train would end up in the elevator - maybe he should have and she could have been fucked air tight. Write that one for us.