All Comments on 'Eleven'

But waaay to short....Please follow up with their (cum) playtime.

Btw,I especially liked,"My cheeks ached and the heavy liquid pooling in my mouth felt like mercurial pearls" oh god that line was so elegantly written & so sinfully nasty at the same time.

Lord,to find a woman who is into cumplay is like a dream come true,no pun intended lol

It's deliciously written, and aside from being deliciously sexy, it has some great and humorous turns of phrase in it---- "the jumbled underworld mess I called my purse" --- "eleven random rowdies recruited from the corner saloon. . ."

I look forward to reading more.

weird plot...but the writing was good.