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All Comments on 'Eli's Visit'

by HannahBlue

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Pretty competent writing.

A believable story line and a well told little vignette. This could be worked into a longer story but maybe this is it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Loved it

The ending is hilarious.

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