by Captain_Ron
Wasn't sure how Elise would be received, but as long as people are interested I can try to keep going. I have some ideas for a chapter 3, just trying to figure out how to keep it in the spirit of the series.
This is one of the best series on literotica. Keep the series going.
I've been eagerly awaiting part 2 of this story. I love the innocent/sluttiness of Elise.
It reminds me a little bit of Donnerbbq's Kim series, which I loved. Can't wait to read more about Elise and your vision of her.
Don't make us wait for long Captain Ron. This story has lits if things going for it. I hope Jeff gets involved as the innocent male in the story and maybe he will have the biggest of the house. I can't wait until Kevin starts witnessing more of the action and not just being told about it. Keep going. The series is great!
Thanks for all the encouragement. I'm not used to receiving comments.
I'm currently working on chapter 3. Hopefully done by end of week.
This series is by far the best I've read in a while. I can't wait to see what happens next. I agree with the previous comment. I would love to see Jeff become more involved.
...can we readers be allowed to know what Elise actually did with the roommates at some point? Perhaps in a conversation or a series of them between Elise and her friend Emily? It'd be very hot to get more of those details at some point.
Great read and it seems Elise is really liking let her naughty side out whilst making out its no big deal. Not sure why someone didn't actually get what occurred between the three of them. Seems really obvious what did happen in that half hour and why she needed a shower. Well written and only picked one mistake with a variation on a word which autocorrect most likely did. On to the last two chapters.