All Comments on 'Elise, Employee of the Year Ch. 02'

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MentalcaseMentalcasealmost 6 years ago
Awesome!

Well done as always, my friend!

snugglepuss13snugglepuss13almost 6 years ago
Cant wait for the next

Any timeline for the next chapter?

Captain_RonCaptain_Ronalmost 6 years agoAuthor
Next Chapter

snugglepuss13 - The next installment is in progress and if everything goes well we're probably looking at a couple weeks before it's published. I don't want to keep readers waiting months this time.

m1cha3lm1cha3lalmost 6 years ago
Very nice.

Great story. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
This series brings me back to literotica

Love this series! Thank you for continuing, especially when it got difficult to continue awhile ago. Glad to see you're still enjoying it and being creative!

Side note: I bet there could be some spectacular April's fools pranks gone wrong for Elise. Have you thought about a quick side story for the April fools contest? I bet you could score really high in the contest

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Nice

Can you do a story from Elise POV.

snugglepuss13snugglepuss13almost 6 years ago
Awesome

Elise for me is the most fascinating character here literotica. I hope you keep writing about her. And keeping the readers always guessing is one of your strenghts that keep you apart from other writers.

Crixus17Crixus17almost 6 years ago
I know its been said before

But a view of these stories from her point of view would be great. I know one writer had did a few but hasnt done any more recently

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

I'm SO enjoying your stories. Please continue writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Awesome story!

I love your stories and this is an amazing addition to Elise's tale. I can't wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great work. Bravo.

Great story so far :) eta on ch. 3?

nthqldfuncplnthqldfuncplover 5 years ago
Love it

Love all of Elise’s stories they are great been waiting a long time for this great to see your still writing keep up the great work

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Just as amazing as all the other Elise chapters, I hope we're not waiting as long for next as this one! :P

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Update?

Cmon man ep3!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Please? This wait is getting tedious

Please? Dont ruin a great series with such a long wait :(

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hot but frustrating

It just sucks that they both think they're doing him a favour with their actions, well, Elise less so probably but Emily definitely. It's just frustrating that he has two girls that would fawn over him yet they think he wants them to fool around with other guys, it's almost like an oblivious harem protagonist but much worse.

brickman4brickman4about 2 years ago

To think that anyone could possibly be that naive to think one was not playing the other , just to outrageous to think any of this could be real .

Yet I can't stop reading , just how fun seeing all of it from the outside in .

HighBrowHighBrowabout 1 year ago

I realize it is the unique part of the story, the constant misunderstanding between the cuck and his cuckoldress, but it’s getting old. Occasionally, I could accept it, but he would have to be a complete moron to misunderstand everything.

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January 28, 2023 I had always wanted to make a series out of That Was Then. I must have tried writing a follow up 100 times. Chapter 2 will be posted soon, only four years later than intended. --- Thank you to everyone who took the time to read my stories, I hoped you enjo...