All Comments on 'Elise - Slutty Intern Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great story

Keep them cumming : )

oldmsufanoldmsufanabout 6 years ago
Great start

Different type pf story where the guy is a virgin. You've got many way to go with this tale in future chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More please

Looking forward to future chapters very much.

Shadowforce1Shadowforce1about 6 years ago
Great Start

Great start. Can't wait for the rest.

SilkessSilkessabout 6 years ago
Loved it!

You have loads of talent, looking forward to more. You got me so hot I came for you!

The build up was great btw, it didn’t take too long, it made it more exciting. I love the wild power of maleness unleashing in a primal way. Knowing no inexperienced men are ever this good didn’t bother me because you wrote it so realistically.

igat1969igat1969over 5 years ago
Great job...

...I read this earlier on but didn't comment. Good story line that sets up future episodes. Nicely captures youthful lust and life. Good description of the sex scenes.

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January 2020: I’ve been working on a few stories over the last few weeks and may have some ready to go soon. *I try to line up my stories to the right categories...I really do. Yet I’m continually told a story is in the wrong category and belongs elsewhere. Suggestions usual...

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