by Trysten
Great story telling and very hot. You made me care about the character and see inside his world while also understanding Elise and setting up an amazingly tense situation. I’m eagerly awaiting more!
Elise seems sophisticated and immature. The dynamics of her world and trying to be her own person have lead to some interesting/questionable choices. Don't go easy on her, because growing up is hard.
Great story so far. She needs to abuse him a few more times before the table turns....