All Comments on 'Elise - Slutty Intern Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Awesome

You write a great story. Looking forward to the next chapters.

SilkessSilkessabout 6 years ago
I’m hooked!

Great story telling and very hot. You made me care about the character and see inside his world while also understanding Elise and setting up an amazingly tense situation. I’m eagerly awaiting more!

silverlock17silverlock17about 6 years ago
I hope it's complicated

Elise seems sophisticated and immature. The dynamics of her world and trying to be her own person have lead to some interesting/questionable choices. Don't go easy on her, because growing up is hard.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Keep going!

Great story so far. She needs to abuse him a few more times before the table turns....

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January 2020: I’ve been working on a few stories over the last few weeks and may have some ready to go soon. *I try to line up my stories to the right categories...I really do. Yet I’m continually told a story is in the wrong category and belongs elsewhere. Suggestions usual...

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