All Comments on 'Elizabeth 06: The Honeymoon'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
5 chapters and 8 pages ago this had possibilities

But it got weighed down in the verbosity. I mean really. How about you get a good editor and cut 2/3 of this out and have a nice little story instead of this runaway train. Way too much blah, blah, blah. No stars.

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