All Comments on 'Elizabeth and Lucille Ch. 01'

Great Start as always Mary!

Mary,

Another fun story full of tease and dirty bits.

Can't wait to read more.

Liked it a lot ... what happens when they cuckold Derek?!

Mary Granger has a unique style - at least unique to Literotica. She uses a very genteel vocabulary and seems almost as if she's avoiding sex. When her story finally gets to the sexual details they are quite powerful. This is probably not to everyone's tastes but I love it! Please, Mary, don't hurry your characters. The sex in your stories is well worth the wait and build up. As much as I'm looking forward to the further episodes of "Elizabeth and Lucille" please continue with the other series you've started.

The dialogue was meant to be formal perhaps, but it is ridiculous. There are so many errors that even if people did talk like that they don't talk like that. It isn't special it's silly.

I know the last comment wasn't very pleasant but I would like to thank the readers who have said nice things about my fantasies.

They are not true stories but I must confess I enjoy writing them very much as well as reading similar fantasies which I find really exciting. It is very easy to imagine myself as being Lucille.

I would also like to thank all the people who have voted 5 out of 5 for my stories as it is most encouraging.

Mary

Another good beginning.

Love the gentle yet sexy way the author has with her stories . Give us more lovely lady !!

I love your style of writing; it is gentle, sexy and erotic and in my opinion your stories are well paced. I await the next instalment with bated breath! Thank you.

I'd like to echo the positive comments already made about this story. You are so good at building up the excitement slowly usually leaving the reader wanting more. I am looking forward to the next chapter and also hope you will write more chapters of your other excellent stories.

I love the way you are able to build breathless anticipation in your stories and stir in a lovely helping of illicit naughtiness. Masterfully done - five stars from this reader!

Cant wait to read more

I quite liked it. Off to read #2.

Great story as always and I can't wait for the following sequels. I like your little naughtiness and the Elizabeth on Lucy possibility is very exciting

I was sad when I had read all of the stories by MaryR, but luckily one of my comments there attracted a short, charming reply from MaryGrangerx-who is one and the same.She explained that she had forgotten the password for the MaryR identity.

How good it would be if we readers were to be successful in appealing to literotica to have the identities merged, so that all of this wonderful work could be united

Literotica would have no doubt that they are the same after reading only a few of her lines. Such an original "voice". I will appeal and I hope that other readers will too.

Nice story, or rather naughty story I should say. Good detail. I'll have to read the rest of the chapters, curious to see if Derek is made a cuckold.

I enjoy the pace of this story, it is a bit frustrating but that reflects the nature of the people involved. Lucille, or should I call her Mrs Kent, is deliberately taking her time in seducing Elizabeth so we feel Elizabeth's frustration and need. I loved the matter of fact way Mrs Kent describes her sexuality and what she wants. It adds to the story.

Lovely. ❤️