All Comments on 'Elizabeth's Discipline'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Good story idea...nice writing!

I just have to wonder if the author is truly a grown man. His stories seem more the work of a much younger person considering the settings (parents house?). It could go much deeper if the house belonged to the main character. Writing like a grown up works in this genre. Otherwise, good stuff!

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