All Comments on 'Elizabeth's Roman Awakening Ch. 05'

Utterly fantastic story. I loved it as it moved inevitably towards its conclusion, as Michael became the cuckold he had always secretly yearned to be. Elizabeth has definitely been black bred now.

I dislike unfinished offerings. Would to see the Laura and Mark story finished.

Just wanted to say I think the story is absolutely fantastic, but the reader's comments are childish. This is fiction on an adult, erotic site. If you don't like the story, don't read it. If you read it and don't like it, then make your comments. But if you are reading chapter 5 and are commenting you don't like it, you are lying because you probably read chapters 1 to 4 already and are still reading? that is hypocritical. Personally, it is great. I am not a bigot or a racist and I love this type of fiction....keep up your great work Lemondial....on to chapter 6....

Can't wait for chapter 6. Don't let the trolls and idiots give you grief.

You're a really great writer.

Please finish the Laura and Mark story though. We all have been hanging for quite a while!

The daughter who is bible belt going on vacation in Africa? She will meet a black stud who will convert her into a wanton slut after whipping her ass with a belt.

When can we expect it? Loved this series as well the earlier ones.

I enjoy reading your stories very much. It would be fabulous to follow this trio through their journey. Being a midwesterner myself, Ohio , but living in Europe for over 20 years ,I would love to hear how this plays out.

Yes, I am curious to know if the daughter becomes involved and would also like read about Elizabeth's obsession and signs of possession . We currently know of a couple, here in Germany, that have much the same relationship.

Keep up the good fight.

Best

Rick

Are you planning to write the next chapter? Do let us know when we could expect it.

Sorry to all my loyal readers for making you wait. Next chapter should appear soon. Life intervened -- by which I mean parenthood. Remember that we have a bi-racial toddler (yes, for real) by my wife's bull, and he's a real handful (the toddler of course :-)

I hope you enjoy chapter and I promise to reduce the time between chapters! There's a lot more to this story and I really feel the need to share it with you all.

Thanks for reading and for your encouragement!

You could set this shit story in another city?

The Romans love shitting on niggers monkeys.

When we ruled the world they were on the trees and there are still

Such a good story. I particularly Like reading about Michael's humiliations. (poor man!)

Hottest wife to ever come out of Michiana!

Fuck this! Tell little Joey to Fuck off! Take your wife and go home, or leave her there. She's already a cheating whore.