All Comments on 'Ella's Men Ch. 01'

by bdcatalyst

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AcalAcalover 14 years ago
Way too short

Focus on extending your submissions if you want a better result.

Good start however

Dixiedevil67Dixiedevil67over 14 years ago
Very nice story

This was a very well written story. I agree, it could have been longer, however the character descriptions and flow of the story was very good. Keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great start.

Very nice set-up. Looking forward to more.

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