- BDSM
- Elle Ch. 02
- Page 3
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"It's over now," he whispered softly in her ear "enough for tonight."
"I love you, Elle."
She didn't respond.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 5 years agoThat’s a piss poor excuse for a Dom. She may very well be a Sub but she’s been used and abused by the prick she’s calling Master.
Mindset of a Sub - he said “No Safeword”, you can’t take it back and profess to follow the tenets of BDSM and ask her if she wants to change her safeword. He decides to use a knife on her when he knows it’s the one thing she’s utterly terrified of, what an absolute bastard. He claims to love her? I’d don’t want to know what he’ll do to someone he hates.
The main focus of a Sub during a scene is NOT DISAPPOINTING HER(HIS) DOM. If she opted for a safeword AFTER he’s stated he doesn’t want her to have one then she knows she has failed and disappointed him.
Fucking prick with a god complex. I ditched before the story before the end of the chapter and after seeing the other comments I’m glad I did, it only got worse.
The story had an interesting start but spiralled into something ridiculous.
I’m out.
Anonymousover 9 years agoFor to scare someone you love by threatening to cut them with a knife doesn't show much love
Anonymousabout 11 years agoThat is therapy of some kind to push her through the knife play hard limit to heal her from the rape? I'm not sure what to say....why should one get over a fear of knives? Sounds healthy to me....
And he's married and leaving?........'fix' her before he goes?
Anonymousover 14 years agoVery well done. Much better written than most stories posted here. One note: use of the word Flicked could be reduced.
Can't wait for the next one!
Anonymousover 15 years agoI loves this story. Please continue it, tell me more about what happens to Elle. Perhaps you could write about how she overcomes her fears of being raped???Perhpas her master could guide her through this.
Thank you again for this brilliant story.
XSub91210X
