All Comments on 'Ellen Journals 08. The Seminarians'

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impo_60impo_60over 9 years ago
The temptations...

The temptations...That's what this should be called. Only one of the guys understood she was the devil, and the only way to escape from him (her) was to go away. The others 3 were doomed as soon as they decided to stay. The devil have chosen his disciple, not because of size (Bill or Bob, he was called both names, was bigger), but only for being the weakest. The one that failed fast, the one that showed that his will to serve the devil was his vocation!!! The other two were lost too, because the devil's seed kept growing in them. That day, she wasn't a whore, she simply was the devil...

starmanfivestarmanfiveover 9 years ago
That was wonderful

The writing was terrific. I love when one relates their own life in a story. This story was very erotic and sad at the same time. Bittersweet. *****

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