All Comments on 'Ellie's Desperation'

This is a seriously hot story, can't wait to read the second chapter! If I was in Mike's position I know exactly where that piss-soaked thong would end up, in my pocket!

great story. well written. enough pee to stiffen the cock, and then a cliff-hanger ending to leave the reader wanting more. nice job!

Good story. I really enjoyed it.

Great job. Cannot wait for the next (hopefully longer) installment.

Great story . Hope she drinks 🍸 several more vodkas in the next installment , becomes inebriated and desperate to pee again .

This is totally my thing, the way you write about the desperation is horny

Great story . Very hot . Next part , please .

Super! Love the style. Please, please do the follow-up!