All Comments on 'Elsewhere'

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RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyalmost 19 years ago
Very nice

I enjoyed reading this, I really wouldn't change the storyline at all, the editing needs some work.. but hey so does mine. I think it is a good read and very sexy.

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