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AnarchiaAnarchiaover 6 years ago
love it

look forward to more!

Cabl3Cabl3over 6 years ago

Good story, I always enjoy a well written fantasy. Hope you continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Definitely potential, one bit of criticism

First off, I enjoyed the premise. The only thing I would offer is to somehow indicate when they are speaking, whether it's quotes, making the text bold, something like that. Keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great story !

Please continue this awesome story !

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Please translate more

Pretty please with cheese

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