All Comments on 'Elysium Fields'

You're off to a great start keep up the good work.

and here is another one.

Elysium was the Place.

The Adjective is Elysian.

Pedantic Kilroy.

But Lennie's closing response should have been, "Only after I take you to the room!"

In the mid 70's I worked in Hollywood, and the secretary from the office across the hall from mine, invited me to Elysium....what a grand a glorious place, I have moved out of state because of work, but when I am in L.A. I have to go back...tis truly a remarkable place...

Normally one opens a nude day story to find some extension beyond, often way beyond reality. Not here. This reads so real and honest. The people are real with real faults; I can easily picture Elysium Fields. The ending was so charmingly real. All the reality made for a very enjoyable read. Thank you for giving me the chance to step into somebody else's shoes so convincingly. Excellent first submission.

Loved the humanity of the story. Good stuff!

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