All Comments on 'Elysium: The Chair'

Great story, I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. Could not read fast enough. Please keep them coming.

Really well written, thoroughly enjoyed.

patientlee recommended this series. First chapter was eh, this one tried my patience. Its too "weird" for E/V. Belongs in Erotic Horror, no doubt.

It was long and boring, I have to say. The first whole page with the friends added nothing. Should have just started with the appearance of Lilah.

Erotica is supposed to be hot. And yet this story is about making you feel weird/bad about the hot. You describe the guy's arousal in intense detail, but then its all undercut by the weird freaking doll woman. So which is it?

it's like this place, Elysium. Stick it in EH, where good erotica goes to die, and be as weird and ambiguous as you want.

This manifests a deep ambivalence about sexuality and about women that is just grating on my nerves. Work yourself out before you post for f's sake.