All Comments on 'Ema Applies for a New Job Ch. 01'

You should write in Spanish, and then have someone translate it for you.

Loved the bit of back story. It made the rest even more believable.

...storytelling is a bit on the sparse, short side. for my taste. could use a few highlights.

though on 2nd glance, if it is your style, better remain consistent than mangle it up. Simply add experience .... more shine in your "efficient" style might follow.

thanks and best wishes

Have you been using English long? You're not even close with the tense of many words and sometimes you have the wrong word altogether.