All Comments on 'Email Cuckold Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Another marriage thrown upon the bonfire of selfishness and excess. Far sexier would have been for them to have actually found a balance and truly have a loving and hot marriage. It leaves a bitter after taste. On the positive side, it is well written enough to engage the reader and draw out emotions, even if they are not erotic ones.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Of Course .....

Hubby turns gay.What a pile of....... You took what was a half decent story and clichéd it to death.What's next slurping cum from wifey? Cock cages. More humiliation. You ruined this No vote Sorry I voted before

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Yessss!

Please do add a cock cage!

illicit_writerillicit_writerabout 8 years agoAuthor
Anonymous feedback

Thanks for the feedback. I agree a balance would have been interesting but there was a reason I put this under Fetish and not under Loving Wives. When I had the seed of this story, it was Karen discovering about themselves as individuals, not as a couple. Thanks for taking the time to respond!

msbishop702msbishop702about 8 years ago
Oh god no more please

More please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
great story

loved it all. her getting started. his submission..

keep on writing!

liz33ndliz33ndover 7 years ago
i enjoyed it,,

it was very erotic, and seductive, it kept me reading, and excited the whole time. I did get confused a few times, as in the mis-type when rob's ass was burning, but it was ken getting fucked.. yes I would read more chapters, as I love your writing style.. and hot topic

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I encouraded my wife too and she protested but gave in, yeah I'm her cuckold.

While I'm not gay I have sucked off some of her "dates" and one evening when we happened to be out with two of them we both got fucked and I sort of enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Very good series.

Really enjoyed all 7 chapters. Liked the way you slowly got Ken out of his house and into hands on and face on activities. Would have preferred a little more detail when Ken was taking cum in his mouth. Did he enjoy the taste and swallowing?

graymangazergraymangazerabout 5 years ago

Nice idea, a little different from the normal cuckold story though I feel things got away from what was originally planned.

A couple of observations, not criticisms, but things that occurred to me. Karen was at pains that she wouldn't cheat yet she flirted and teased, grinding her ass and more against strangers, and that was before she knew of Ken's plans. To a lot of men that's cheating. I think it's pretty hot but some would disagree, had this been in the loving wives category the BTB brigade would have a field day. I also wonder how far she'd have gone had she not discovered those emails? From what we learned of her I suspect she'd still end up fucking all and sundry.

One other thing: Ken gave no hint he was interested in gay sex, yet he took to it like a duck to water. This aspect actually spoilt the tale a little for me. Had it been mentioned early on it'd been okay, though still not my cup of tea, or had it been forced on him, again okay, but then I guess it's everyone to their own. Though I did get the feeling it was an afterthought and included to open a wider readership. Personally I didn't think it was required, the story was easily good enough without it, one interesting point, although I wasn't keen on the gay male aspect, I thought the lesbian interludes were hot as chilli sauce.

None of this is criticism, just my own thoughts. I really enjoyed the story. Kens thoughts and emotions were spot on, the fact that he couldn't persuade Karen to do the things he wanted so resorted to extreme actions was perfectly feasible, especially as he convinced himself that it'd only be innocent teasing ect. How many men have fantasized about exactly the same?

As I said: Karen's dalliance with the other girls was very erotic, especially when it was hinted that she was being dominated by Jill and Sue. I also liked her controlling attitude toward her husband, and then the poker night. That was as far as I felt it should go so cudos that she didn't have the obligatory gang bang or the black man with a giant cock, not that I anything against black men but it does become a little tedious.

All in all a very good story, just a few typos but nothing to spoil the flow and well described and very believable - up until the gay episode - I would love to read more but I can't see where it could go without resorting to cliched scenarios, but maybe the author could surprise us?

Five stars and thanks from me.

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