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by Emberly

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visioneervisioneeralmost 7 years ago

Ember, you've shared a sensual and sexy BDSM story. You do a good job showing her/your anticipation. A constructive criticism I would offer is to relax the dialogue, particular her master, as he often sounds like he is reciting his lines. That said, I enjoyed this, and encourage you to write and post more of your stories.

ualmech88ualmech88almost 7 years ago
Experience vs fantasy

Emberly. Very good. I would encourage you to write more. Also glad you are in a good relationship. Fantasy can enhance anything good and vibrant. Break boundaries and rock on.

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I'm a shy submissive. It's not something I can turn on and off, it's part of me and I've been this way for as long as I can remember. I'm usually up for a chat but not really into cyber. I come here mostly for the sexy stories and to hang out with like minded people. I am very...