by hudsbart
The tension is delicious as is the sex. Where did Ryan's promise to himself go - that he wouldn't have sex except in a committed relationship? Ryan's frequent apologizing doesn't match their previous date or Ryan's quiet confidence. So good. Such real characters.
I'm in awe in how you describe the characters, their feelings, how they react and read each other accurately. I felt their doubts and desires, hopes and future potential in finally making two unite as one. No unnecessary fluff, just the good stuff!