All Comments on 'Embracing the Tension Ch. 04'

You wrote this chapter beautifully. Eric’s pain, vulnerability, confusion, loss... anger... it was all there over his family’s reaction to him being gay. I love this story and especially how perfectly you are handling Ryan and Eric’s love for each other. Because they definitely love each other.

I love this story, and this chapter was amazing! The writing skill is top notch!

This beautiful love story deserved a happier ending, as the first part left us all in pain and needing more. With all the chemistry, angst, frustration, disappointment, loss, and pain finally all beginning to fade away, we get a new healthier beginning. This wonderful new second chance journey of acceptance, understanding, and healing is exquisite! These two beautiful men have loved each other almost from the start, enough to be scared apart for a time to try and figure it all out. Keep it going, cant wait for more...... Thanks

Thank you for yet another flawless installment! Erik really tore me up, but Ryan has his wonderful way of putting things back together. It’s weird — at the start, I never would’ve imagined Erik floating like he is now amongst all these vulnerabilities, but here we are. Ryan’s support is steady and sure; the perfect balance to all the wounds pulled back at dinner.

Can’t wait for more!

xx

Thanks for continuing their story. The Title name you gave was non expected. I had forgotten your pen name. 😔 will wait for more chapters.

In my never ending quest to find great writers on Lit, I would probably pass on this but this series, and the series before this are incredibly written. Wow. Bravo.