All Comments on 'Emerald Girls Ch. 04'

Great chapter! I can’t wait to read more of your installments! I would suggest making the next chapter about getting to know the girls, and maybe even having Alicia struggle to decide to be free and leave or be free and stay with Jack since he’s such a great guy. Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Please keep writing this story and your others. Chris

I doubt she will want to leave the farm after that hot time in the back seat even if she is free there is plenty to enjoy on the farm as a free woman along with helping with the sale the farms trade goods. Plus I am sure the sisters each will provide plenty of incentive for her to stay.

great story keep it up looking forward to more.

Alicia should want to go back home, but visit the farm often for some "vacation" what everyone else is saying about her struggling with staying or going home is nonsense in a galaxy of easy and (mostly) affordable galactic travel. she heads home for awhile to rebuild her life and then comes back from time to time for some fun.

This is really good! I hope you keep it up. I know Jack is opposed to the slave trade but it would be cool for him to build his own harem of women.

Will there be a chapter 5 and if there is is there a release date?

When will next ch 05 come out and will it be longer

I'm excited for the next instalment in this series

When's the next chapter. I'm dying here

Please make a prt. 5!!!

This story really needs a part 5! Maybe even multiple chapters!

Please make a chapter 5!!! This story is awesome!

Can't wait for Ch.5

You should have Alicia as his personal slave!!! Perhaps she changes her mind and wants to stay his slave?

Is there going to be part 5

More please!?

Lit. Should put a mark on unfinished stories or authors with unfinished stories after a certain length of time.