All Comments on 'Emergency Plumber'

You had a decent start...although a worn-out premise, I don't mind plumber/repairman stories. You must have patience developing the plot. There should be sexual tension, build-up, a slow, series of events that with just the right mood and cajoling produces a hot, sexual climax. You had no transition from hard-working plumber to sex other than his overt proposition.

Sorry, 1* for unoriginality.

Might as well have the milkman, postal carrier, pizza delivery and pool cleaner (who cares if they might not have a pool) show up and have a party with the soon to be young, homeless divorcee...

as maybe also your narrator! There may be no husband! She seems to have been a virgin! Otherwise why so utterly innocent, inexperienced, and even slightly ashamed? Our plumber was presumptuous, but he scored! No blood visible afterward? In the real world, not all hymens are alike, and many don't survive even average non-sexual girlhood activities, especially horseback riding or -- pardon the information -- gymnastics and vigorous cheerleading! A shy girl weary of her asexual life might well behave and speak as she does.

Why would it be posted in Loving Wives category?

that was dumb. Another master of seduction story. Looks like the same author using different ID's is polluting the LW section today.

Get a plot, get some characters, and tell a story that is original and compelling. This was just another You wanna fuck? cartoon.

from this writer land in LW!

Ever wonder why anony reads all these stories and then tell us he hates them or they're no good? This retarded fool had a wife who fucked him over his entire marriage and he's nuts because of it!

how can any person rate this as 5 stars???

3 stars, maybe for a cuck

Nothing

For very long. Plus real.men don't need to hit on customers. Plus professionals just don't go there .Punk AF plot s waste of some decent writing

Enjoyed the story. Might have been a bit rushed but I liked it. What woman doesn't like a compliment? In my dream world to have a plumber tell you they would enjoy having sex with you cause your beautiful and sexy after their job is done, yippee. But in the real world it does not happen. That is why authors write these stories cause there fantasy. We all need to step away from the stress and come here to read stories out of the ordinary or out of our fantasies. It is a pleasure I am glad Literotica is available to us. You do not like what was written go write your own freaken story. Its not easy but giving your opinions apparently are. Thank you Ashson

And yes, simply to piss off the Loving Wife troll

Didn’t piss me off, I gave it a *2.