All Comments on 'Emerson and the Lion Ch. 04'

How much I adore your story.. its Great... wonderful writing. .. great plot.. very interesting ppl... I lov. The theme.. area.. an overall Base to it.... Plz continue it for quite awhile... hugs&kisses

This story is soooooo good I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. I am so intrigued as to what will happen with all characters. Will Caleb fall hard for Samir? Will he learn to like what Emerson teaches him on what it is to have a good lion for him. Will be waiting for the next chapter. Please keep writing for this could be a awesome story. It is an AWESOME story!!!!!

ACLASSYLADY

I originally thought there was more to this story than just dom/sub, but it appears I may be wrong. I still like it but I do wish Emerson would express his preferences a bit more and not totally do everything Ali says. Why the hell didn't he just say he wanted a hamburger instead of chicken? I hope Caleb doesn't also suddenly become a total submissive. Truthfully, the total submissive aspect does make them predictable and not as interesting. I think a bit more conflict is needed. Nothing overly dramatic, just a little. These lions need their prides shaken up a bit.

Very hot.

the subtlety of your sex scenes actually makes them really hot. they aren't drawn out or super descriptive, but the slight details here and there are great. especially in this chapter with ali's hand playing around with em, and then later at the spa with caleb riding samir.

When does Ali give Emerson a blow job? It would be nice to be treated with "turn about is fair play" once in a while. I realize Ali is a sexy guy with the hairy chest and big cock, but still, if he really loves his little cub, a blow job would go a long way!

Why does Ali have to give em a blowjob? Ali is the man, the total top. Em is the woman, the bottom. Ali does give em oral sex. He eats his pussy out like a real man. As far as Dom sub, this is loving relationship. Ali does physically hurt em. There is no bdsm like there is with most Dom sub. This is basically a man and a woman in a traditional Arab culture.

Well written, but I can't read any more of this. Emi's stupidity is grating on my nerves. I wasn't even this dumb when I was 5 and met a Pedophile.