All Comments on 'Emerson and the Lion Ch. 11'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Yes yes please continue this more. Emi is more like his wife than husband. And Ali treats him like so, referring to his hole as pussy. Please continue with this.

canndcanndalmost 8 years ago
Some parts of comment mention spoilers from other story if you haven't read them...

I think this chapter would have been perfect right before samir's story to show where he'd ended up with Caleb and the way emi and his lion were becoming the couple we s see in samir's story. It makes me sad in a way that emi didn't take the vows to heart where he is told he will always be heard. I wish he'd stood up for his rights in small ways so that years later he doesn't seem like a shadow o of himself. He doesn't seem truly happy or complete i should say despite the love of his lion and kids bc he let parts of himself go little by little with Ali. This filled in some blanks for events or the way we find everyone in samir and Lincoln's. If be thrilled to have more of this and see how they end up with the little ones. I'd really like to see the rest of Sammie and Lincoln's story. Of course more Noah. Hey, I love all your stuff 😉

canndcanndalmost 8 years ago

If you can, I'd love a happily ever after for izem someday. He is how Ali and emi came together. He deserves to find the right cub for him. There is something about izem I like.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

More more more please your stories are the best ever keep it coming and Lincoln more there to please and don't stop Noah all your stories are so amazingly written and so real you really are fabulous x

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
What she said...

Everything that cannd said in both comments, I agree with and could not have said any better.

Bird_Man_RNBird_Man_RNalmost 6 years ago
OMG!

The wedding was so sweet and beautiful, and perfect for them!

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