All Comments on 'Emily and Elisa'

Lovely beginning,

Looking forward two the next chapter.

Hoping somewhere in say a long

chapter two or three Mother decided to

really teach them everything they don't

yet know...

Very good beginnIng.

Will Sophia be sleeping over soon?

How much does she know about the twins fun?

I'm looking forward to the next installment where ever it goes.

Please continue the story (and write many others as well!

THANK YOU.

The boy better learn how to eat pussy, because his sisters will want to see what it feels like to have a man lick their pussies.

A great story.

Thanks for the read.

Lucas Good story Nice I'm happy you got your head job done by a girl and all of this happen in one short afternoon.I know you are on cloud nine but watch you tell even tho they are your sisters and I know by now you have more than likely got the thrill of eating pussy:but these girls are only 16 and you could very easily go to jail for this.My nephew is in jail because of 1 head job he got 4 yearsand 7 monthes so watch out.But if you want pussy I'm sure you could find it at school are any place you hang.

are there anymore chapters

Very good start. Got to go read ch.2 now. Surely, Sofia? will show up by ch.3?

Keep it up. I can see several chapters to this story, easily. And congrats on the good spelling, grammar, and sentence structure. Only saw one misspelling, God, which is normally capitalized. And if that's all I see, you're doing great. Easier to read with good writing, so can't wait for more!

Keep going.

Dude,they were just starting. He should fuck one doggie style while the other lays underneath and licks the bottom side of his cock while he goes in and out of the other.

Then, in case they are not on birth control, he pulls out and comes down the other ones throat, if she allows it. We NEVER force anything on women. thats a total buzzkill.

Arousing story of two sisters that want to play! Nice fantasy!

4 Stars