All Comments on 'Emily, Exposed Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

LOVED the strip scene description, Pt 2 was even more enjoyable than Pt 1. My suggestion is to build more of the character's backstories and create some external conflict if you continue the series and I hope you do! Keep writing!

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