All Comments on 'Emily Untethered Ch. 01'

Been wondering if anything happened between Emily and her father.

Can't wait to read more.

It's good to have you back on the scene.

Must be something in the water.

Thanks for writing. Looking forward to more.

Revisiting some of the characters from your Just The Six of Us series. The earlier story left Emily's story unfinished, as far as how she began and what happened to her after she returned home. We will finally get the answers! Thank you so very much.

I always enjoy your work, since it is written in a style I find very readable. You also provide a deeper insight into the characters motivations and feelings than so many others. You truly have a gift of being able to draw the reader in.

Additionally, it is evident you pay careful attention to punctuation and word choice, which contributes so much to the readability of your stories.

I am really looking forward to seeing the rest of this one, Impressive start, fully worth 5*.

SSW 1050

Love the story so far. Please do more, can't wait to read the next part. I like how hesitant her father is. I enjoy stories where the father is very nervous about what's happening to him once he "notices" his daughter. Can't wait for part two.

I love the build up, but after 5 pages i just need them to fuck, please more soon!

amazjng chapter man, just curious if you will ever write a sequel for the original series maybe about danni, emma and mike? anyway another 5 starz from me.

My title does say it all, this book is to good.