All Comments on 'Emily Untethered Ch. 03'

The incredibly long, slow, build continues and gets hotter with each episode. My only quibble is your use of desert (a dry sandy area) for dessert (a sweet treat). Very well crafted story, and I'm looking forward to the continuation,

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Please keep them coming.

Thank you, i love it

One of the very best I've read. Such a masterful job at build up, deflection, mis-direction and yet, every step of the way it just builds hotter and hotter!

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Come on man we need all the juicy details.

more brilliance from the writer of just the six of us. well done bro

Still amazing to re discover this story each time.

Wow! Such a great buildup to this moment. Very sexy. Very powerful. Can’t wait to se what happens next.